I'm relatively pleased with one of the designs (upright bottle) due to the stock choice and basis behind the concept (packaging optimism/nostalgia as a medicine). The others however, had to be printed on basic 80gsm copy paper in the mac suite as my printer rejected the stock I wanted. The concepts were also not as clear as I hoped.
Im happy with the feedback I received as it was generally positive but as expected, the stock choices were mentioned. They also noted the designs may be too minimalistic which I agree with.
Strengths
Good craftmanship
Good consideration of stock (I think in terms of bottle packaging)
Good text on bottle
Simple and effective use of colour
Areas for improvement
Consistent stocks
Perhaps too minimalist
Additional comments
Really great concept +
Task for 19/10
4 x A2 boards
1) Statement/concept, facts, statistics, why is it good?
2) Contextual references (existing logo, packaging etc) mapping the design direction
3) + 4) Initial ideas, format choices, outcomes etc
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